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Love is Work
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09-26-2014, 12:35 PM
I love this poem. You could flip it around to say work is love in some cases. Since all of work can be a prayer and offering to God. That might add a twist that would flip the audience towards introspection for a moment. The poem as a whole is off putting as it seems to hold you at arms length. If you could grab your audience's hearts somewhere in the middle unexpectedly, this poem could be very powerful. I suggest doing that.
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Love is Work - by Mwaba don - 09-23-2014, 03:49 AM
RE: Love is Work - by Wjames - 09-23-2014, 07:00 AM
RE: Love is Work - by Mwaba don - 09-23-2014, 07:56 AM
RE: Love is Work - by ellajam - 09-23-2014, 08:38 AM
RE: Love is Work - by rayheinrich - 09-23-2014, 04:37 PM
RE: Love is Work - by Mwaba don - 09-23-2014, 06:26 PM
RE: Love is Work - by 2fargone - 09-25-2014, 10:16 AM
RE: Love is Work - by Starbeam - 09-26-2014, 12:35 PM
RE: Love is Work - by StanleyZ - 10-03-2014, 04:13 PM
RE: Love is Work - by Amitey Blyss - 10-25-2014, 01:32 PM
RE: Love is Work - by drithebee - 10-27-2014, 06:29 AM
RE: Love is Work - by azure - 11-17-2014, 02:25 AM
RE: Love is Work - by Christoph2 - 11-26-2014, 03:40 PM
RE: Love is Work - by tectak - 11-26-2014, 05:36 PM
RE: Love is Work - by Brownlie - 11-26-2014, 05:41 PM
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