09-25-2014, 06:04 PM
i get the feeling something is missing. thers a visual image of the pile of paper/ashes and an emotional image of zero romance and i coan't reconcile toe two.
(09-25-2014, 05:53 PM)brandontoh Wrote: I Know One Thing
Pile the ashes
up into a hill.
Burnt paper, dried
leaves, without romance.
Flames flat, quiet,
drain colours out
and shrivel what's left.
Pile the ashes,
no white, no black,
just grey.