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09-25-2014, 03:14 PM
The second part of the poem can stand on its own and the loneliness metaphor can be felt by reading just that. I would do away with the first stanza because it does nothing more to the poem. I like the formatting of the first version. It gives more emphasis to the thoughts the poet is trying to convey. I could not relate the poem with the title.
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< loneliness > - by rayheinrich - 09-24-2014, 03:56 PM
RE: < the earth is pointed with horns > - by 2fargone - 09-24-2014, 11:47 PM
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RE: < the earth is pointed with horns > - by ellajam - 09-25-2014, 12:08 AM
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