Frogs On Drugs
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(09-25-2014, 06:46 AM)ellajam Wrote:  I love that we are discussing the fraction of a second that it takes to read the word on, and that it matters. Big Grin

Oh Jaminella, you unlearned soul! Dale was referring to the Japanese phonetic element "on" (or "onji").
He was saying that your "on" wasn't on enough to be an "on" so leave it off.
Which, needless to say, turns me onji.  Right on, Dale!

On-less rewrite:

        old pond
        frog jumps in
        piranha
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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Frogs On Drugs - by Magpie - 09-25-2014, 03:29 AM
RE: Frogs On Drugs - by Erthona - 09-25-2014, 04:35 AM
RE: Frogs On Drugs - by ellajam - 09-25-2014, 06:46 AM
RE: Frogs On Drugs - by rayheinrich - 09-25-2014, 01:14 PM
RE: Frogs On Drugs - by ellajam - 09-25-2014, 02:51 PM
RE: Frogs On Drugs - by rayheinrich - 09-25-2014, 06:37 PM
RE: Frogs On Drugs - by billy - 09-25-2014, 06:50 PM
RE: Frogs On Drugs - by rayheinrich - 09-25-2014, 07:04 PM
RE: Frogs On Drugs - by Erthona - 09-26-2014, 11:33 AM



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