09-25-2014, 05:58 AM
Comments address 1st version:
It's both a love poem and a nature poem.
The pointed horns were a mistake, the title came from a different poem.
Sorry for the confusion and thanks for taking the time to read the partial(?)
nonsense I posted. Ray
(09-24-2014, 11:47 PM)2fargone Wrote: i dont know what to think about this poem.... is it a love poem or is it a nature poem?
Was it supposed to and even poem or uneven? Where did the pointed horns come from?
.... although i like the idiom u use at the end
It's both a love poem and a nature poem.
The pointed horns were a mistake, the title came from a different poem.
Sorry for the confusion and thanks for taking the time to read the partial(?)
nonsense I posted. Ray
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions