haiku
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bluebottle on pizza
swatted -
who wants this slice


Switching the 's' on the second line to a 't' would not only raise a subject,
it would introduce a problematic decision (for some of us) as well.
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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haiku - by billy - 09-23-2014, 11:43 PM
RE: haiku - by Magpie - 09-24-2014, 12:40 AM
RE: haiku - by billy - 09-24-2014, 03:46 AM
RE: haiku - by ellajam - 09-24-2014, 01:32 AM
RE: haiku - by billy - 09-24-2014, 03:48 AM
RE: haiku - by Magpie - 09-24-2014, 04:19 AM
RE: haiku - by billy - 09-24-2014, 05:05 PM
RE: haiku - by billy - 09-24-2014, 05:08 PM
RE: haiku - by rayheinrich - 09-24-2014, 06:35 PM
RE: haiku - by billy - 09-24-2014, 06:49 PM
RE: haiku - by rayheinrich - 09-24-2014, 06:55 PM
RE: haiku - by billy - 09-24-2014, 07:53 PM
RE: haiku - by Mwaba don - 09-27-2014, 08:44 AM



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