< loneliness >
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second more-intentional version:
       
                < loneliness >
       
        Loneliness
        I am in love with your beauty.  
        How many times have I come to you
        with some fresh loss
        and been comforted
        by your clear sorrow,
        been cradled
        in your spare arms.
       
       
        As the desert enfolds its wisdom
        with the blessing of sand;
        you hold your love for me
        in a single point
        that as it enters
        is as warm as sun.
       
                   . . .



first cat-induced wrong version:

< the earth is pointed with horns >

       as the desert
       enfolds its wisdom
       with the blessing of sand

       you

       hold your love for me
       in a single point
       that as it enters
       is as warm as the sun

                    - - -
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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< loneliness > - by rayheinrich - 09-24-2014, 03:56 PM
RE: < the earth is pointed with horns > - by 2fargone - 09-24-2014, 11:47 PM
RE: < 24.9.14 > - by rayheinrich - 09-25-2014, 05:58 AM
RE: < 24.9.14 > - by rayheinrich - 09-25-2014, 06:30 AM
RE: < 24.9.14 > - by Tamara - 09-25-2014, 03:14 PM
RE: < 24.9.14 > - by rayheinrich - 09-25-2014, 07:23 PM



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