haiku

haiku

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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09-24-2014, 03:53 AM

for me it reads more like a senryu

(09-23-2014, 06:00 PM)Tamara Wrote: on the lawn
watered by my tears
new weeds grow

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haiku - by Tamara - 09-23-2014, 06:00 PM

RE: haiku - by Magpie - 09-24-2014, 01:20 AM

RE: haiku - by Tamara - 09-24-2014, 01:29 AM

RE: haiku - by rayheinrich - 09-24-2014, 06:51 PM

RE: haiku - by billy - 09-24-2014, 03:53 AM

RE: haiku - by Tamara - 09-24-2014, 06:24 PM

RE: haiku - by billy - 09-30-2014, 09:56 PM

RE: haiku - by Mwaba don - 09-27-2014, 08:27 AM

RE: haiku - by haikutec - 09-30-2014, 01:39 AM

RE: haiku - by rayheinrich - 09-30-2014, 06:47 AM

RE: haiku - by haikutec - 09-30-2014, 07:12 AM

RE: haiku - by rayheinrich - 09-30-2014, 09:16 AM

RE: haiku - by billy - 09-30-2014, 09:49 PM

RE: haiku - by Tamara - 09-30-2014, 01:51 AM

RE: haiku - by haikutec - 09-30-2014, 02:02 AM

RE: haiku - by rayheinrich - 09-30-2014, 07:28 AM

RE: haiku - by rayheinrich - 10-01-2014, 03:34 AM

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