Those Hands That do Dishes

Those Hands That do Dishes

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09-24-2014, 02:39 AM

The last line did not work for me. Compared with the rest of the poem, I felt it was weak. And personally I feel the use of gerunds make the lines in a poem weaker.

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Those Hands That do Dishes - by billy - 09-23-2014, 11:58 PM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by Tamara - 09-24-2014, 02:39 AM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by billy - 09-24-2014, 03:39 AM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by cidermaid - 09-24-2014, 06:10 AM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by Keith - 09-24-2014, 07:03 AM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by JPB - 09-24-2014, 07:24 AM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by billy - 09-24-2014, 04:56 PM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by 71degrees - 09-24-2014, 08:19 AM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by billy - 09-24-2014, 04:52 PM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by cidermaid - 09-24-2014, 05:45 PM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by billy - 09-24-2014, 06:23 PM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by StanleyZ - 09-25-2014, 01:58 PM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by ellajam - 09-25-2014, 03:05 PM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by billy - 09-25-2014, 04:34 PM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by Wjames - 09-29-2014, 03:39 AM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by billy - 09-29-2014, 06:19 PM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by Lysander Gray - 10-05-2014, 01:00 PM

RE: Those Hands That do Dishes - by billy - 10-05-2014, 06:44 PM

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