09-24-2014, 01:57 AM
No matter how much I like it I'm not voting you into office.
Reading again today, it's just the few spots that sound overly specific and repetitive to me, like "out to his dad as his dad". I like the long lines, they seem like a summer day.
Reading again today, it's just the few spots that sound overly specific and repetitive to me, like "out to his dad as his dad". I like the long lines, they seem like a summer day.
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