dad
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(09-23-2014, 02:58 AM)Mwaba don Wrote:  
(09-20-2014, 12:39 PM)Tamara Wrote:  large sized shoes
feet cling on to memories (I love this line, never heard one like this before).
you live


or for more clarity, 

slipping feet into large sized shoes
feet cling on to memories
you live
Nice poem.
Thank you Mwaba for taking your time to check this one out.
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Messages In This Thread
dad - by Tamara - 09-20-2014, 12:39 PM
RE: dad - by ellajam - 09-20-2014, 01:19 PM
RE: dad - by just mercedes - 09-20-2014, 01:42 PM
RE: dad - by Tamara - 09-21-2014, 01:12 AM
RE: dad - by ChristopherSea - 09-22-2014, 09:03 PM
RE: dad - by Tamara - 09-22-2014, 09:37 PM
RE: dad - by ChristopherSea - 09-22-2014, 11:02 PM
RE: dad - by Tamara - 09-23-2014, 01:05 AM
RE: dad - by billy - 09-23-2014, 02:36 AM
RE: dad - by Mwaba don - 09-23-2014, 02:58 AM
RE: dad - by Tamara - 09-24-2014, 12:32 AM
RE: dad - by haikutec - 09-30-2014, 01:49 AM
RE: dad - by Tamara - 09-30-2014, 02:04 AM
RE: dad - by haikutec - 09-30-2014, 02:21 AM
RE: dad - by azure - 11-25-2014, 12:22 PM
RE: dad - by dwestmor - 01-01-2015, 06:20 AM
RE: dad - by Leah S. - 01-04-2015, 03:35 AM



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