09-23-2014, 08:54 AM
I meant this to be a little staccato and hard to read, Thoughts welcome.
Trinkets first edit Billy, Merc, Keith
Week nights
I would head upstairs
at two minutes before seven,
turn on "Murder, She Wrote"
for my mother – her favourite show.
She would beam;
grateful for trinkets now.
Some nights
I'd go back down to my room
and sob.
Original
Week nights
I would head upstairs
two minutes before seven, and
turn on 'Murder She Wrote'
for my mother – her favourite show.
She would beam;
grateful of trinkets now.
Some nights
I'd go back down to my room
and sob.
Trinkets first edit Billy, Merc, Keith
Week nights
I would head upstairs
at two minutes before seven,
turn on "Murder, She Wrote"
for my mother – her favourite show.
She would beam;
grateful for trinkets now.
Some nights
I'd go back down to my room
and sob.
Original
Week nights
I would head upstairs
two minutes before seven, and
turn on 'Murder She Wrote'
for my mother – her favourite show.
She would beam;
grateful of trinkets now.
Some nights
I'd go back down to my room
and sob.