22.9.14
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(09-23-2014, 06:06 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:  
        she agrees with him
        but only for a day
        autumn equinox

I like this very much, very cleverly done.
There are a few different possibilities for how it could be read and the particularly choice of word in 'agrees' and it's own different meanings is what gives it so much scope for interpretations.
Nicely done,

Mark
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22.9.14 - by rayheinrich - 09-23-2014, 06:06 AM
RE: 22.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2014, 07:18 AM
RE: 22.09.14 - by rayheinrich - 09-23-2014, 10:58 AM
RE: 22.09.14 - by Tamara - 09-23-2014, 02:51 PM
RE: 22.09.14 - by rayheinrich - 09-23-2014, 04:09 PM
RE: 22.9.14 - by Mwaba don - 09-27-2014, 08:35 AM
RE: 22.9.14 - by rayheinrich - 09-27-2014, 07:56 PM
RE: 22.9.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2015, 06:32 PM
RE: 22.9.14 - by rayheinrich - 09-24-2015, 02:42 PM



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