09-23-2014, 06:53 AM
(09-22-2014, 09:24 PM)ellajam Wrote:Any discussion about haiku is fine with me and of course any metaphors seen here were unitentionally intentional... I think???(09-22-2014, 01:51 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote: JupiterI love the small flyer blocking a whole planet. Not to bring up another discussion of metaphor in haiku, but a fine poem on perspective.
eclipsed -
by a bat

Thanks for the kind comments,
Mark
wae aye man ye radgie
