Haiku 21.09.14

Haiku 21.09.14

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09-23-2014, 06:45 AM

(09-22-2014, 04:39 AM)just mercedes Wrote: Great snapshot of a moment! I think the line inversion works better.

I think you are right about the inversion, I'm starting to see that it works better for the juxtaposition.
Thanks for reading,

Mark

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Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-22-2014, 01:51 AM

RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2014, 06:42 AM

RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Tamara - 09-22-2014, 02:07 AM

RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2014, 06:44 AM

RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by just mercedes - 09-22-2014, 04:39 AM

RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2014, 06:45 AM

RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by ellajam - 09-22-2014, 09:24 PM

RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2014, 06:53 AM

RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by billy - 09-23-2014, 02:45 AM

RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2014, 06:55 AM

RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Mwaba don - 09-23-2014, 03:07 AM

RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2014, 06:56 AM

RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2014, 07:00 AM

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