Haiku 21.09.14

[Magpie]

Love it. Bright and dark at once. Do you need the dash?? I'm never sure.

Thank you... Regarding the dash, I think it would still work without it. I'm using it to show the juxtaposition and I think it's in the right place for this haiku. First when I wrote haiku I never even knew about the dash and juxtaposition, then I used to put dashes in anywhere without really understanding where they should be and I'm still not 100% certain but it's getting better. 

Mark