Haiku 21.09.14
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Wonderful!
(Though maybe leave out the 'by' preposition for that authentic 'Japanese' feel.)  Smile

P.S. 'bat' is a summer kigo: kakuidori  蚊喰鳥 - "bird that eats mosquitoes"

P.P.S. a baseball 'bat', like 'baseball', is a spring kigo
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-22-2014, 01:51 AM
RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Tiger the Lion - 09-22-2014, 01:58 AM
RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2014, 06:42 AM
RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Tamara - 09-22-2014, 02:07 AM
RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2014, 06:44 AM
RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by just mercedes - 09-22-2014, 04:39 AM
RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2014, 06:45 AM
RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by ellajam - 09-22-2014, 09:24 PM
RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2014, 06:53 AM
RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by billy - 09-23-2014, 02:45 AM
RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2014, 06:55 AM
RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Mwaba don - 09-23-2014, 03:07 AM
RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2014, 06:56 AM
RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by rayheinrich - 09-23-2014, 05:26 AM
RE: Haiku 21.09.14 - by Magpie - 09-23-2014, 07:00 AM



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