09-23-2014, 05:26 AM
Wonderful!
(Though maybe leave out the 'by' preposition for that authentic 'Japanese' feel.)
P.S. 'bat' is a summer kigo: kakuidori 蚊喰鳥 - "bird that eats mosquitoes"
P.P.S. a baseball 'bat', like 'baseball', is a spring kigo
(Though maybe leave out the 'by' preposition for that authentic 'Japanese' feel.)

P.S. 'bat' is a summer kigo: kakuidori 蚊喰鳥 - "bird that eats mosquitoes"
P.P.S. a baseball 'bat', like 'baseball', is a spring kigo
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions

