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09-23-2014, 03:34 AM

(09-08-2014, 03:35 PM)Viktor Vaughn Wrote: i'm like a wasp that's flown
into the room

a room is just a box

no wonder I'm afraid

Nice perception on the third line. But does it mean? Are you saying that, It is a cage? why are you scared of the empty room?

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world cage - by Viktor Vaughn - 09-08-2014, 03:35 PM

RE: world cage - by Blu - 09-08-2014, 03:58 PM

RE: world cage - by tectak - 09-09-2014, 05:49 AM

RE: world cage - by Erthona - 09-09-2014, 08:04 AM

RE: world cage - by Viktor Vaughn - 09-10-2014, 06:47 PM

RE: world cage - by billy - 09-10-2014, 07:44 PM

RE: world cage - by Mwaba don - 09-23-2014, 03:34 AM

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