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09-23-2014, 02:58 AM

(09-20-2014, 12:39 PM)Tamara Wrote: large sized shoes
feet cling on to memories (I love this line, never heard one like this before).
you live

or for more clarity,

slipping feet into large sized shoes
feet cling on to memories
you live

Nice poem.

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dad - by Tamara - 09-20-2014, 12:39 PM

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RE: dad - by Tamara - 09-21-2014, 01:12 AM

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RE: dad - by Tamara - 09-22-2014, 09:37 PM

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RE: dad - by Tamara - 09-23-2014, 01:05 AM

RE: dad - by billy - 09-23-2014, 02:36 AM

RE: dad - by Mwaba don - 09-23-2014, 02:58 AM

RE: dad - by Tamara - 09-24-2014, 12:32 AM

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