Eyelids, edit 2
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this edit is much different as its a lot nearer the original. it's the reason i like it. the new opening draws the reader in in a more curious way. (in a good more curious way)
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Eyelids, edit 2 - by crow - 09-02-2014, 05:25 PM
RE: Eyelids - by Leanne - 09-02-2014, 05:53 PM
RE: Eyelids - by billy - 09-02-2014, 06:20 PM
RE: Eyelids - by ellajam - 09-02-2014, 10:03 PM
RE: Eyelids - by crow - 09-04-2014, 12:41 PM
RE: Eyelids - by cjchaffin - 09-04-2014, 01:58 PM
RE: Eyelids - by crow - 09-04-2014, 02:43 PM
RE: Eyelids, edit 1 - by QDeathstar - 09-05-2014, 11:35 AM
RE: Eyelids, edit 1 - by cjchaffin - 09-05-2014, 01:17 PM
RE: Eyelids, edit 1 - by danny_ - 09-05-2014, 08:58 PM
RE: Eyelids, edit 1 - by billy - 09-05-2014, 09:07 PM
RE: Eyelids, edit 1 - by justcloudy - 09-06-2014, 07:00 AM
RE: Eyelids, edit 1 - by crow - 09-21-2014, 02:18 PM
RE: Eyelids, edit 2 - by billy - 09-21-2014, 09:08 PM
RE: Eyelids, edit 2 - by crow - 09-22-2014, 06:18 AM
RE: Eyelids, edit 2 - by cjchaffin - 09-23-2014, 12:50 AM
RE: Eyelids, edit 2 - by billy - 09-22-2014, 07:25 PM
RE: Eyelids, edit 2 - by ChristopherSea - 09-22-2014, 11:31 PM



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