A summer's night (first draft)

[Tamara]

A summer's night
Falling swiftly, like silk sheets
From the statue of time
Beneath its majestic sky
In the pasture of memories, I rejoice
The warmth and scent of grass
Lift my spirit
It begins to dance
With the swirls of nostalgia
Who call the distant stars to join.

(Any good? cliches?)

The imagery is good. You have tried to capture the beauty around you. But I find it too cliched and there is nothing new in the words to turn on the reader. You should always leave something for the readers to interpret than giving it all to them.