09-20-2014, 01:19 PM
Hi, Tamara, 
I don't think you need more than the original. You may be able to lose "on".
It hit the heart, thanks for posting it.
I don't think you need more than the original. You may be able to lose "on".
It hit the heart, thanks for posting it.
(09-20-2014, 12:39 PM)Tamara Wrote: large sized shoes
feet cling on to memories
you live
or for more clarity,
slipping feet into large sized shoes
feet cling on to memories
you live
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