mother
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edit posted. i chucked most of the original first two strophes and replaced them with an actual memory
that i hope serves to paint a better picture.

still struggling with a better title though...suggestions are welcome!
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mother - by cjchaffin - 09-10-2014, 08:23 AM
RE: mother - by Tiger the Lion - 09-10-2014, 08:57 AM
RE: mother - by cjchaffin - 09-15-2014, 12:08 PM
RE: mother - by Todd - 09-10-2014, 12:51 PM
RE: mother - by cjchaffin - 09-15-2014, 12:09 PM
RE: mother - by 71degrees - 09-15-2014, 11:44 AM
RE: mother - by cjchaffin - 09-15-2014, 12:11 PM
RE: mother - by cjchaffin - 09-19-2014, 12:55 PM
RE: mother - by makeshift - 09-19-2014, 01:59 PM
RE: mother - by cjchaffin - 09-22-2014, 01:08 AM
RE: mother - by Mwaba don - 09-22-2014, 08:42 PM
RE: mother - by Mwaba don - 09-22-2014, 08:50 PM
RE: mother - by Tamara - 09-22-2014, 09:01 PM
RE: mother - by ellajam - 09-22-2014, 09:19 PM
RE: mother - by ChristopherSea - 09-22-2014, 11:16 PM
RE: mother - by cjchaffin - 09-23-2014, 01:00 AM
RE: mother - by 71degrees - 09-24-2014, 08:14 AM
RE: mother - by cjchaffin - 09-24-2014, 09:41 AM
RE: mother - by JPB - 09-24-2014, 09:14 AM
RE: mother - by cjchaffin - 09-24-2014, 09:43 AM



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