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Haiku #2

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09-19-2014, 09:20 AM

(09-12-2014, 10:25 PM)alatos Wrote: The grass sprays
katydids
as I grumble along.

Erthona's suggestion is perfect and makes it an excellent haiku. I would do away with the upper case though. Haiku, I thought was meant to be written in lower case. That is what I have seen. Not sure though.

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Haiku #2 - by alatos - 09-12-2014, 10:25 PM

RE: Haiku #2 - by billy - 09-12-2014, 10:42 PM

RE: Haiku #2 - by alatos - 09-13-2014, 02:53 AM

RE: Haiku #2 - by Erthona - 09-13-2014, 05:37 AM

RE: Haiku #2 - by Tamara - 09-19-2014, 09:20 AM

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