Susie's Song (edit)

[Tiger the Lion]

mic drop?

Thank you so much crow! It will take make most of the night, or week, for me to digest everything you said. Some of it sailed over my head but I will be sure it ask you if I get stuck. I'm a little humbled that you liked this enough to spend so much time and thought on it. I think after I get an understanding of everything you mentioned, it will be a help with my writing far beyond this piece. So much for me to think about. 
Truly grateful,
Paul