The mare

The mare

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09-18-2014, 09:47 PM

Thanks for posting this, AJ, heartbreaking. I appreciated the immediacy of the start with the description of a usual day afterwards, then a return to the tragedy. I was thinking (hoping for) a birth at first but that didn't last long. Well done.

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The mare - by cidermaid - 09-09-2014, 04:33 PM

RE: The mare - by justcloudy - 09-10-2014, 06:36 AM

RE: The mare - by just mercedes - 09-10-2014, 07:35 AM

RE: The mare - by cidermaid - 09-10-2014, 03:43 PM

RE: The mare - by just mercedes - 09-10-2014, 04:11 PM

RE: The mare - by Mwaba don - 09-11-2014, 05:58 AM

RE: The mare - by ellajam - 09-18-2014, 09:47 PM

RE: The mare - by cidermaid - 09-18-2014, 10:13 PM

RE: The mare - by Keith - 09-19-2014, 07:59 AM

RE: The mare - by cidermaid - 09-19-2014, 04:36 PM

RE: The mare - by Keith - 09-24-2014, 09:39 AM

RE: The mare - by Keith - 01-27-2016, 12:23 AM

RE: The mare - by dwesty - 02-06-2016, 11:57 AM

RE: The mare - by ellajam - 02-06-2016, 08:21 PM

RE: The mare - by cidermaid - 02-07-2016, 01:15 PM

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