Susie's Song (edit)

Susie's Song (edit)

cidermaid Offline

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09-16-2014, 11:13 PM

Hi loved your line : splashing all that Japanese milky wonder
but the remember at the end distracted from the poem for my read.
This is a good read thanks for sharing.
AJ.

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Susie's Song (edit) - by Tiger the Lion - 09-16-2014, 10:28 AM

RE: Susie's Song - by cidermaid - 09-16-2014, 11:13 PM

RE: Susie's Song - by Wjames - 09-17-2014, 05:48 AM

RE: Susie's Song - by Tiger the Lion - 09-17-2014, 07:14 AM

RE: Susie's Song - by crow - 09-18-2014, 07:30 AM

RE: Susie's Song - by Tiger the Lion - 09-18-2014, 11:57 AM

RE: Susie's Song - by billy - 09-18-2014, 05:23 PM

RE: Susie's Song - by Tiger the Lion - 09-18-2014, 08:03 PM

RE: Susie's Song - by crow - 09-18-2014, 08:04 PM

RE: Susie's Song - by crow - 09-18-2014, 11:48 PM

RE: Susie's Song - by Tiger the Lion - 09-19-2014, 05:01 AM

RE: Susie's Song - by crow - 09-19-2014, 10:42 AM

RE: Susie's Song - by Tiger the Lion - 09-19-2014, 12:02 PM

RE: Susie's Song - by Tiger the Lion - 09-28-2014, 11:46 AM

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