09-16-2014, 10:28 AM
(This post was last modified: 06-05-2024, 07:12 AM by Tiger the Lion.)
Some significant changes in this edit. Not the way I would normally format an edit but I'm having trouble with some glitches. So I will call this 2nd Edit. Huge thanks to Crow for making me think!!
Susie's Song
we were playing a card game
sat in those awful plastic chairs
you kept leaning forward in yours
splashing all that Japanese milky wonder
into my eyes
I put some Beatles on a loop
figuring them universal
and you clapped
and bobbed your head
shouting 'Ob-la-di-ob-la-da'
in perfect English
while I rehearsed Kazue
Susie's Song
we were playing a card game
sat in those awful plastic chairs
you kept leaning forward in yours
splashing all that Japanese milky wonder
into my eyes
I put some Beatles on a loop
figuring them universal
and you clapped
and bobbed your head
shouting 'Ob-la-di-ob-la-da'
in perfect English
while I rehearsed Kazue