09-15-2014, 03:19 PM
(09-15-2014, 12:37 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Can't seem to take the scissors to this any further. Hmmm
always autumn
she falls asleep
praying
Five words is scissors enough. As presented, it's an interesting poem.
"Always autumn" is a bit cliched, but fair enough. Falling asleep praying is
a metaphor of no small intent. Fine as is.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions