Diana

[cjchaffin]

Just a point of interest, you might notice the incredibly profound role that the word "brushstrokes" has. It's really really interesting, that.

thank you thank you thank you, crow. you always seem to be able to pinpoint exactly what it is i struggle with in my writing. your play-by-play analyses are just what i need to jumpstart this poor thing and give it some much-needed life. i'm grateful for the in-depth read, it really does help a lot to have that line by line breakdown.