Second Skin
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(09-09-2014, 06:22 PM)billy Wrote:  not sure if you intended to have meter but if you did it misses in a couple of places and sounds a bit clunky.

other than that it was a good read with some good insights/memories for this reader. the 2nd line hit home though i was more a mod than a rocker (back in the day)
Motown and a Mod I would have had to hate you Billy, for no other reason than it was an expected exponant of your Second skin. Thanks for calling out the clunkiness I will have a tinker with the engine.

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Second Skin - by Keith - 09-02-2014, 09:37 AM
RE: Second Skin - by cidermaid - 09-09-2014, 05:13 PM
RE: Second Skin - by Keith - 09-13-2014, 07:43 PM
RE: Second Skin - by billy - 09-09-2014, 06:22 PM
RE: Second Skin - by Keith - 09-13-2014, 07:47 PM



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