09-11-2014, 05:58 AM
I didn't exactly see the fun in the poem. But very good use of words.
I poem had nice rhymes. also I thought may the poem was in the wrong category. I did not see how the falling and dusting was fun until the last line. I thought following the surges of the poem through to the end was the fun part.
I poem had nice rhymes. also I thought may the poem was in the wrong category. I did not see how the falling and dusting was fun until the last line. I thought following the surges of the poem through to the end was the fun part.