A summer's night (first draft)
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A summer's night
Falling swiftly, like silk sheets
From the statue of time
Beneath its majestic sky
In the pasture of memories, I rejoice
The warmth and scent of grass
Lift my spirit
It begins to dance
With the swirls of nostalgia
Who call the distant stars to join.

(Any good? cliches?)
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A summer's night (first draft) - by zahrakh - 09-11-2014, 03:03 AM
RE: A summer's night (first draft) - by rowens - 09-11-2014, 03:25 AM
RE: A summer's night (first draft) - by zahrakh - 09-12-2014, 05:43 PM
RE: A summer's night (first draft) - by billy - 09-12-2014, 06:08 PM
RE: A summer's night (first draft) - by zahrakh - 09-13-2014, 12:05 AM
RE: A summer's night (first draft) - by Erthona - 09-13-2014, 06:04 AM
RE: A summer's night (first draft) - by Mwaba don - 09-20-2014, 09:50 PM
RE: A summer's night (first draft) - by zahrakh - 09-21-2014, 01:50 AM
RE: A summer's night (first draft) - by Tamara - 09-21-2014, 02:44 PM
RE: A summer's night (first draft) - by tectak - 10-06-2014, 05:16 PM



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