09-10-2014, 06:47 PM
Blu: inspired in part because of a wasp that had flown into my room a few weeks ago. As for what it means, well I have my own opinions on why I used a wasp. I'm interested to hear yours :p
tectak: cheers mate, for some reason I didn't know this sub-forum existed
Erthona: by using 'the room' initially, I was hoping to create a clear, specific image. It's not just any room, it's the room. But the reason why I left the room specificless (not a word but whatever) is because it could be any room. Extending the analogy, if the room to a wasp is like a box, then was is the world to a person? That was the idea I was hoping to get across.
I've not ever done a short form poem before, so thanks for the insights!
tectak: cheers mate, for some reason I didn't know this sub-forum existed
Erthona: by using 'the room' initially, I was hoping to create a clear, specific image. It's not just any room, it's the room. But the reason why I left the room specificless (not a word but whatever) is because it could be any room. Extending the analogy, if the room to a wasp is like a box, then was is the world to a person? That was the idea I was hoping to get across.
I've not ever done a short form poem before, so thanks for the insights!