The mare

[just mercedes]

Hi JC & Mercedes,
Thanks for stopping to read and comment.
You are right about this one not being in the right place...but is it misc either?
I have not written much for a while and was not sure if i was ready for the rigours of workshopping this one as I had written it to get some closure on a bad memory that kept replaying. (The ones that go ...if only I had...)
I nearly didn't post it, but then did so on an impulse...glad i did now...I love spending time on the site.
Anyway thanks again..appreciate your time and kindness.
AJ

Hi AJ - I actually had a strange shiver run up and down my spine. This poem of yours, and Milo's poem of flight, echo two poems I've written, so twice this week I've been deja-vuing, wondering if the world is really just one great organism and we only think we're individuals. Or something.