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09-10-2014, 07:50 AM

(09-10-2014, 07:49 AM)just mercedes Wrote: Oh, I can see and hear it all! I wanted the last line to have 'sugar-fueled fury' though.

yesssss! thank you! i love it. Thumbsup

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suburban jungle - by cjchaffin - 09-10-2014, 07:40 AM

RE: suburban jungle - by just mercedes - 09-10-2014, 07:49 AM

RE: suburban jungle - by cjchaffin - 09-10-2014, 07:50 AM

RE: suburban jungle - by cjchaffin - 09-10-2014, 08:04 AM

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