The mare

The mare

just mercedes
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09-10-2014, 07:35 AM

I had trouble seeing the 'fun' in this too - a good poem though. I liked the way you told the story, made me think of Emily's "Tell all the truth, but tell it slant." I found it very effective - maybe because I used to ride a lot, and have owned, and lost, horses.

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The mare - by cidermaid - 09-09-2014, 04:33 PM

RE: The mare - by justcloudy - 09-10-2014, 06:36 AM

RE: The mare - by just mercedes - 09-10-2014, 07:35 AM

RE: The mare - by cidermaid - 09-10-2014, 03:43 PM

RE: The mare - by just mercedes - 09-10-2014, 04:11 PM

RE: The mare - by Mwaba don - 09-11-2014, 05:58 AM

RE: The mare - by ellajam - 09-18-2014, 09:47 PM

RE: The mare - by cidermaid - 09-18-2014, 10:13 PM

RE: The mare - by Keith - 09-19-2014, 07:59 AM

RE: The mare - by cidermaid - 09-19-2014, 04:36 PM

RE: The mare - by Keith - 09-24-2014, 09:39 AM

RE: The mare - by Keith - 01-27-2016, 12:23 AM

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RE: The mare - by ellajam - 02-06-2016, 08:21 PM

RE: The mare - by cidermaid - 02-07-2016, 01:15 PM

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