09-10-2014, 06:36 AM
AJ did you mean to post this in the right forum? Doesn't seem particularly lighthearted to me....
Thanks for the read though, I enjoyed it! I really could see and feel the presence the stables and orchard, and I loved horses when I was a kid but have been severely allergic for ages now, so that's the closest I felt to one in a while! ;p
Had a hard time following the narrative though. On the first read I thought it was a horse giving birth, but now I think maybe she was sick and died? Not sure. But the description and the individual bits are lovely. "Peeling red lead paint" is fantastic too.
Thanks for the read though, I enjoyed it! I really could see and feel the presence the stables and orchard, and I loved horses when I was a kid but have been severely allergic for ages now, so that's the closest I felt to one in a while! ;p
Had a hard time following the narrative though. On the first read I thought it was a horse giving birth, but now I think maybe she was sick and died? Not sure. But the description and the individual bits are lovely. "Peeling red lead paint" is fantastic too.
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.