09-10-2014, 03:44 AM
Last line is great. I adore it. I think you could probably skip the whole part about being born, and focus more on your present 'box'. Or focus on being born 'into a box' or something along those lines.
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The box - by denniswilson - 09-01-2014, 06:13 AM
RE: The box - by just mercedes - 09-01-2014, 07:21 AM
RE: The box - by QDeathstar - 09-01-2014, 08:49 AM
RE: The box - by simmon - 09-01-2014, 04:00 PM
RE: The box - by denniswilson - 09-01-2014, 05:22 PM
RE: The box - by QDeathstar - 09-01-2014, 08:46 PM
RE: The box - by tectak - 09-02-2014, 07:43 AM
RE: The box - by Bunx - 09-03-2014, 05:34 AM
RE: The box - by VisualPoet703 - 09-06-2014, 03:30 AM
RE: The box - by alatos - 09-10-2014, 03:44 AM
RE: The box - by LadyDay - 09-10-2014, 11:03 AM
RE: The box - by Mwaba don - 09-11-2014, 05:35 AM
RE: The box - by denniswilson - 09-12-2014, 06:23 AM
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