09-09-2014, 06:42 AM
I forgot to post how I changed it after read the comments.
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68
I wanna live in 68,
I wanna dress in black,
I wanna break your windows,
And the City smells like crack.
I love my cigarettes and flags
And I love my band,
We are the Adolf Hitlers,
Dogs, what a dirty sand.
I got my little indigo girl,
She's writing for the news.
She knows everything about
How everybody feels.
Every man in the city
Watches her TV show.
Television won't
Ever be the same.
There are television shows,
Now lock that door.
I sat me down
On a television floor.
I'm living in 68,
I'm dressing red, God Bless the Poor.
Your boyfriend had a White Hat,
Dogs, what a dirty door.
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And these are the final stanzas I 'm thinking about :
I wanna live in 64
I wanna dress in green
I wanna break your heads
and that's how I fit in.
I love my cigarettes and fags,
I love my church,
We are the John F. Kennedys
Dogs, what a dirty search.
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68
I wanna live in 68,
I wanna dress in black,
I wanna break your windows,
And the City smells like crack.
I love my cigarettes and flags
And I love my band,
We are the Adolf Hitlers,
Dogs, what a dirty sand.
I got my little indigo girl,
She's writing for the news.
She knows everything about
How everybody feels.
Every man in the city
Watches her TV show.
Television won't
Ever be the same.
There are television shows,
Now lock that door.
I sat me down
On a television floor.
I'm living in 68,
I'm dressing red, God Bless the Poor.
Your boyfriend had a White Hat,
Dogs, what a dirty door.
///
And these are the final stanzas I 'm thinking about :
I wanna live in 64
I wanna dress in green
I wanna break your heads
and that's how I fit in.
I love my cigarettes and fags,
I love my church,
We are the John F. Kennedys
Dogs, what a dirty search.
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