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09-07-2014, 04:00 PM
(09-07-2014, 03:52 PM)jaysky Wrote: I feel like this could have potential if you were to extend it. Describe it more go into detail more it could broom a great masterpieceQuite apart from the weakness of content in this crit it is unintelligible. Please help the poster by providing some useful insight into how the piece could be improved. A poem, like everything else which is as nothing, has potential. Mod |
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< too bright to see > - by rayheinrich - 09-07-2014, 10:22 AM
RE: < too bright to see > - by Nicco - 09-07-2014, 01:00 PM
RE: < too bright to see > - by rayheinrich - 09-08-2014, 01:18 PM
RE: < too bright to see > - by Nicco - 09-08-2014, 01:42 PM
RE: < too bright to see > - by jaysky - 09-07-2014, 03:52 PM
RE: < too bright to see > - by tectak - 09-07-2014, 04:00 PM
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