First Haiku
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(09-04-2014, 09:52 PM)Gaslampfantasy Wrote:  Also, to return to Danny's original comment, there would only be light from the living room if they were going out of the door. If they were coming in from outside that would not be the case.
I like this poem. Perhaps the question should be as mysterious as the answer. Although I think that many people will come to their own conclusion as to The Question.
good point! the house would be dark if arriving together. thank you.

so, the poem provides a nice little frame of that moment they arrive in the quiet snowfall, moon bright on their smiles, the perfect moment for that question. Smile
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First Haiku - by alatos - 08-31-2014, 10:50 PM
RE: First Haiku - by danny_ - 09-02-2014, 11:53 AM
RE: First Haiku - by Tamara - 09-02-2014, 12:34 PM
RE: First Haiku - by billy - 09-02-2014, 10:50 PM
RE: First Haiku - by Magpie - 09-03-2014, 01:35 AM
RE: First Haiku - by alatos - 09-03-2014, 08:30 AM
RE: First Haiku - by Magpie - 09-03-2014, 09:10 AM
RE: First Haiku - by heslopian - 09-03-2014, 08:38 AM
RE: First Haiku - by ThisGuy1 - 09-03-2014, 11:27 PM
RE: First Haiku - by tectak - 09-04-2014, 08:41 AM
RE: First Haiku - by danny_ - 09-04-2014, 05:20 AM
RE: First Haiku - by Gaslampfantasy - 09-04-2014, 09:52 PM
RE: First Haiku - by danny_ - 09-04-2014, 10:39 PM



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