09-04-2014, 02:19 PM
"Quite wonderful. If Dale doesn't feel admired, his feelings are wrong."
Of course I do Ray,
what a silly thing to say!
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Paul,
I like this line "spilling over with inky passion", that's a great line.
I also like the interlinear rhymes dawn-crayon, and of course the allusions.
Thanks for the crayons Paul.
Dale
Of course I do Ray,
what a silly thing to say!
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Paul,
I like this line "spilling over with inky passion", that's a great line.
I also like the interlinear rhymes dawn-crayon, and of course the allusions.
Thanks for the crayons Paul.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.