09-04-2014, 12:41 PM
What about the double title?
Billy--it references the end line.
Despite the positive feedback, I'm chalking this as a failure, because it has a narrative that wasn't deduced. I'll revise it to try to make that narrative more apparent.
Billy--it references the end line.
Despite the positive feedback, I'm chalking this as a failure, because it has a narrative that wasn't deduced. I'll revise it to try to make that narrative more apparent.
A yak is normal.