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09-04-2014, 12:36 AM
(09-03-2014, 11:25 PM)ThisGuy1 Wrote: I like it. It has a soft meaning, and it's really well wordedPlease read the site information on the definition of valid critique. This is perfect example of what it is not. You are to be congratulated.  On a serious point, critique should at least make some useful comment towards improving the piece; even if it is only the spelling correction of "shinning". See? How hard was that. Mod |
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The Next One - by Erthona - 09-03-2014, 07:53 PM
RE: The Next One - by ThisGuy1 - 09-03-2014, 11:25 PM
RE: The Next One - by tectak - 09-04-2014, 12:36 AM
RE: The Next One - by Erthona - 09-04-2014, 09:41 AM
RE: The Next One - by trueenigma - 09-04-2014, 11:17 AM
RE: The Next One - by Erthona - 09-04-2014, 01:38 PM
RE: The Next One - by billy - 12-03-2014, 11:15 PM
RE: The Next One - by trueenigma - 09-04-2014, 11:04 PM
RE: The Next One - by Erthona - 09-05-2014, 01:18 AM
RE: The Next One - by trueenigma - 09-05-2014, 02:31 AM
RE: The Next One - by Erthona - 09-05-2014, 04:13 AM
RE: The Next One - by trueenigma - 09-05-2014, 04:55 AM
RE: The Next One - by Erthona - 12-03-2014, 08:35 AM
RE: The Next One - by Beacherjosh - 12-03-2014, 12:39 PM
RE: The Next One - by Erthona - 12-03-2014, 10:57 PM
RE: The Next One - by shemthepenman - 12-04-2014, 12:14 AM
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