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[danny_]

I see why you might find an issue with the tense, I suppose. "Soon, you will leave me as usual.." Here, usual should imply that this isn't the only and/or first goodbye; she visits and leaves often. This is a poem taking place before she leaves, about what it's like after she does so. Hope this helps.

oh, i did miss that. maybe the very last S threw me, then. it seems to be in the moment after she leaves, unless it's describing what he sees looks out the window or something. then it does make sense and i just didn't notice that it does again i like the revision, good poem.