Mama 'Ku
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ah, i do see it better now. it seems just a tinge abstract, because i wish i knew why she decides to give up her seat. but there is definitely a good vivid picture going on in just a few lines. almost touching, actually. a woman in her state giving a seat to probably some dude who doesn't even care. i wish there was a tiny bit more to understand, but it's still good.
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Mama 'Ku - by Tiger the Lion - 09-02-2014, 02:37 AM
RE: Mama 'Ku - by Keith - 09-02-2014, 09:01 AM
RE: Mama 'Ku - by Tiger the Lion - 09-02-2014, 11:00 AM
RE: Mama 'Ku - by danny_ - 09-02-2014, 11:46 AM
RE: Mama 'Ku - by Tiger the Lion - 09-02-2014, 11:59 AM
RE: Mama 'Ku - by danny_ - 09-02-2014, 12:09 PM
RE: Mama 'Ku - by Tamara - 09-02-2014, 12:31 PM
RE: Mama 'Ku - by azure - 11-25-2014, 12:31 PM



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