09-02-2014, 02:27 AM
I understand the direction but to me it's too broken up and doesn't flow well. For example the first idea could flow like: The wind separates a leaf from its stead fast home. Hope that helps. Good start though.
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The Wind and the Leaf - by zahrakh - 09-01-2014, 11:46 PM
RE: The Wind and the Leaf - by Tiger the Lion - 09-02-2014, 12:38 AM
RE: The Wind and the Leaf - by PHTj - 09-02-2014, 02:27 AM
RE: The Wind and the Leaf - by dwestmor - 09-03-2014, 06:03 AM
RE: The Wind and the Leaf - by zahrakh - 09-03-2014, 05:14 PM
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