The Wind and the Leaf

[Tiger the Lion]

Hello Z, and welcome. I think you have the start of a good poem here. It is wordier than it needs to be. Try to take each idea expressed in the poem and pare it down. Get rid of fillers like "the most unsuspecting" and "for some moments" and try to be as concise as you can. I think you could probably contain this in 12 lines or so. I like the last 2 lines - even if "it" refers to the leaf and the wind in somewhat confusing order.
Thanks for posting. Best of luck.