09-01-2014, 08:46 PM
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my input is that "the box" or " a box" isn't very descriptive, doesn't flow, and as others have said, a stumbling part of the poem.
if that doesnt help the writer, nothing will.
http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-15300...#pid172589
my input is that "the box" or " a box" isn't very descriptive, doesn't flow, and as others have said, a stumbling part of the poem.
if that doesnt help the writer, nothing will.
http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/thread-15300...#pid172589